Bloodman101's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Do The Madness Dance]

Har, Har, Haar....

It's not bad, something a common 9-10 Year old would laugh at it.
The song is keeping the animation alive, Ive seen you do alot better, so I guess you've improved from now, I was going to rate it 6 for the effort, but since your my friend... :3

8/10 for efforts and improvments.
+1 Star for frieeendship. :3 Lmao!

Matt2k8 responds:

I made this ages ago but thanks :DDD

[Fire Storm. Prologue.]

Haha, Great!

Oh well, it wasn't bad its great you used buttons and such for a change, and music was pretty good..

Improvements:

Dialogue needs to move by faster and make it more easy to understand for some users.
It all looked like Ms Paint, it needs more animation.
Needs to be smoother and not so choppy, thats the reason why Me and Matt and some other members wanted you to practise and show us on Spamtheweb, the more you make, the better you get.
Work on your drawings a bit too. ;)
Ended too quickly for a prologue.

Strong Points:
Good storyline.
Buttons.
Music that matches the scene.
Original storyline.

Great story and music, maybe next time add something to the sticks that are unique like clothes or scars.

Also, I forgot to mention that you put greater effort into the Menu, And the extras was a nice addon!
7/10 for the effort! :)

Hope you reply and make more. lol.

Traid333 responds:

Thanks so much for this review. I will work harder. I am currently working on my Madness series: Madness X.

[Beneath the Sheets]

Hahahaha!

Great! Haha, Can't wait for a sequel.

Loved the "did you see it?" Parts, and then the bit when the ghost (co-incidence?) ran across the screen and done a couple of skits...

I also love the way "The Ghost" Died... Couple of desperate girl scouts... lol!!

Humour: 9/10
Quality and Length: 10/10
Effort: 9/10

Sweet movie, and I hope to see more!

Fro responds:

As for a sequel I don't know if that's going to happen, but perhaps. The thing that I really want to make is a prequel.

Lol, this movie is sort of ironic now.

Thanks for the review.

[StickVille Games #1 INTRO]

Dude...

Have you been reading all my other reviews? GET MORE PRACTISE!!!!!!!!

And do something original, you submit this crap daily. Add music,and don't fill the thing up with dialogue, its good that you added in a continue button which didn't work and failed, but please, get more practise. And also learn to draw better, stickmen? Only good if they are drawn good not wobbly n shit. And the physics really sucked too. GET MORE PRACTISE, BEFORE YOU SUBMIT. Fuck, you're treating newgrounds like spam the web. o.o. Just submitting shit all over the place.

And I lol everytime you copyright your work! HAHAHHA! As if anyone would steal it, it just adds to the suckyness of the lulz!

Hahaha...ha.

[Madness Experiment Mini]

Damn dude.

Practice more, sync sounds more, make sure it flows correctly, instead of choppily, read my other reviews on your flashes, these things are all the same, 5 minute rush jobs that take no effort.

Please, take some time on your work and don't make so much parts, you should join them all together instead. This is stupid.

[Madness Hitman P1]

You always say...

That you're going to make your future submissions longer, but you never do, it's just an excuse to have FLASH written next to your name on your userpage or perhaps you were bored. innit?

Spend some more time, credit the SPRITE ARTISTS!, flow the animation well with sounds. And man, it was as choppy as fuck, get some practice or look at some tutorials first.

But this was a little improvement from your last flashes, but please don't make more for the time being. Your shitting this stuff out daily.

[Madness Until Death. P1]

Stop. Please.

This is outrageous and has taken no effort at all, pretty much about an hour. :F
Work a bit more, add some real music, not that gay fag shit. Make sure the sound flows properly, and please credit the goddamn sprite artists.

[Madness Until Death. P2.]

Man, this is ridiculous!

Stop posting these, please!

Spend more time than about an hour, god! Your shitting these daily, too!
gee, I'm sorry, but get more better and practice more!
The sound didn't flow right, you didn't even credit the sprite artists.
Man, you're just posting these for the hell of getting FLASH written under your name on your userpage. >:|

[Madness 003. Part 2.]

Like in my other reviw on part 1

Don't make 25 parts, this is probably the most crappest thing ive seen, the sound doesnt flow, lack of sprites and walk cycles. And your making 25 parts of this crap.

Don't make another 25 parts, make them all into one simple animation. Meh.

The only reason I gave 2 was the effort. but this looks like a 5min job.

Really improve. Man, A simple pivot animation is better than this.

[Madness 003. Part 1]

This sucks major ass.

The background was white. The pics were shit, arent even sprites. Learn to use a walkcycle.

Also, sound sucked.

On a good note:
The back story you wrote there wasn't bad, but i'm review the flash, so you get a 3 for effort, honestly this looked like a 5min job.

And why are you making lots of parts to it? it'd be better if you join them all together.

Traid333 responds:

I have Macromedia Flash MX 2004, I would really love to get sprites, but all the sprites I find are for Flash 8, therefore, when I open, it has a error "Unexpected File Format"