This sucks major ass.
The background was white. The pics were shit, arent even sprites. Learn to use a walkcycle.
Also, sound sucked.
On a good note:
The back story you wrote there wasn't bad, but i'm review the flash, so you get a 3 for effort, honestly this looked like a 5min job.
And why are you making lots of parts to it? it'd be better if you join them all together.